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Title:  Breaking Free (16/many?)
Fandom:
BTVS; Spike/Xander
Warnings: Slash, AU, Sci-fi, mild-violence, bit of Dom kink
Rating:  NC-17
Summary: Lt. “Xander” Harris and Captain William the Bloody have both suffered and lost in the on going war between the Biogens and Council. Now, Xander finds himself a prisoner of Captain William the Bloody (aka Spike). What will be Xander’s fate?

Ok…not responsible for nose bleeds, heart palpitations, or the sudden need to attack one’s SO.
This is for all of you who have waited so long for an update.
:)

Previous parts here.

As always: Feedback make my heart go pitter-patter.


The two men traded barbs and insults all through their shower. Xander protested Spike washing him and Spike did it any way. They continued with their “fight” until they climbed in bed. Once again Spike arranged his boy until Xander was draped across Spike with his head on Spike’s chest.

Spike began to card his fingers through Xander’s hair.

“Exactly how long am I going to have to grow my hair?” Xander mumbled into Spike’s chest.

“Shhh!" Spike laughed. "Go to sleep. Trust me when I say, pet, your going ta need it.”

Xander grinned and hugged Spike tight. Then he relaxed and let Spike stroke his hair. Xander was asleep long before Spike had reveled enough in the feel and scent of his boy to truly trust Xander was his.


Xander was frustrated. It was right just out of his reach. He kept struggling to grasp it; to hold it and it kept slipping away from him. He moaned. If I could just get a little closer, he thought. Once again Xander reached out and fell short. He twisted and groaned. He was going crazy. He had to have it.

“Easy, pet,” Xander vaguely heard Spike.

“Spike,” Xander mumbled. Maybe he can help me get it? Xander thought as another surge of need rumbled through him. Once again Xander moaned and he heard Spike’s throaty laugh.

“Spike,” Xander mumbled again and clenched his hands while moist heat enveloped him and drew him closer and yet farther away from it. “Please,” Xander moaned.

Hands caressed Xander’s inner thigh and then lightly pinched him. Xander’s eye flew open and his conscious and unconscious mind collided into a maddening maelstrom of want and need as Spike circled Xander’s crown with his tongue.

“Spike!” Xander cried and arched off the bed. Hands immediately gentled Xander’s hips back down to the bed and Spike looked up from between Xander’s legs to stare at his pet’s sleep and passion filled face.

“Morning, pet,” Spike grinned.

“Sp..what are you doing?” Xander panted and groaned trying to make sense of the delicious world unto which he’d woke.

“Just trying to get my brekkies,” Spike replied as he took another long swipe at Xander’s hard morning erection.

“Brekkies?” groaned Xander.

“Mmmm hmmm,” Spike hummed against Xander’s ballsac. “
Lot of protein and trace nutrients in here.”

“Sp…,” Xander started to say before being reduced to a long moan as Spike began to nibble and suck on Xander’s testes. Xander’s hands unclenched and quickly buried themselves in Spike’s soft golden curls.

Spike allowed Xander to play with his hair for a bit why he suckled and nibbled on his pet’s fleshy jewels. Spike loved the inarticulate sounds Xander was making and sucked and nipped even more until he was fairly certain his pet was incoherent. When Spike could once again smell his boy was weeping with need he retreated from his assault on Xander’s round bits.

Gently Spike grabbed Xander’s hands and pulled them away from Spike’s hair. Xander groaned in protest.

“Grab the headboard, pet,” Spike ordered.

“Spike?” Xander panted and stared at his commanding lover. Spike gave his customary arched eyebrow. Xander moaned in frustration but reached over his head and grabbed the headboard.

“Can you keep your hands there, pet,” Spike asked, “or do you need help?”

“What?” Xander answered trying to process what Spike was asking. Then Xander understood. Spike wanted to know if he’d have to put Xander’s hands in the restraints. “No, I can keep them there.”

Spike smiled. If you can’t, pet, he thought, I’ll have some extra fun punishing you.

“Good,” Spike said. “Now, spread your legs wide, keep your knees bent and plant your feet flat on the bed.”

“Spiiiiike,” Xander groaned. Can’t we get back to the nibbling and the suckling, Xander thought as he did as he was ordered.

Spike laughed at his boy’s impatience and lightly bit him on his inner thigh.

“Ouch,” Xander pouted.

Hunger swept through Spike. Some day he was going to tie his boy up and bite every inch of him until he had only that pouting lip for dessert. Until then Spike contented himself by licking away the delicious drop of sweet need that was making its way down Xander’s shaft. Spike purred and Xander hissed in frustration.

“You taste like planetside,” Spike whispered. Xander blushed and moaned.

“Please, Spike,” Xander begged.

“Stay,” Spike ordered as he got up from the bed.

“Hey, still not a dog,” Xander sniped in frustration as he lay naked, spread out and aching.

“Once again, never said you were,” Spike laughed as he dug through one of his dresser drawers and pulled out a small cloth tie and a tube of slick.

Xander had seen both items on his previous searches but hadn’t given them much more than a passing thought. Now they held his attention.

Spike crawled back on the bed and settled between Xander’s legs. He smiled down at his boy. Mine, he thought. From here on out he’s mine. The soddin’ universe can get cattled for all I care if it means givin’ him up.

“Hang on,” Spike ordered and then he bent down and inhaled Xander’s hard length. Xander screamed in surprised pleasure while Spike swallowed him down and sucked him hard. Spike relaxed his throat and took his boy down as deep as he could and milked him. Xander tried to buck under him but Spike held his hips down. Spike sucked and swallowed until he felt Xander was on the verge of a pounding release.

Just as quickly as Spike had inhaled him, Spike released Xander and immediately bound Xander’s cock and balls with the cloth tie.

“NOOO!!” Xander screamed in angry frustration and jerked on the headboard. Tears began leaking from Xander’s right eye. Spike quickly crawled up his pet and began to kiss and lick the tears.

“Shh, Xander, its ok,” Spike soothed, “Trust me pet. Trust me.”

Spike worked his way to Xander’s mouth. Despite his frustration and confusion, Xander welcomed Spike’s kiss and opened up to his blond tormentor. Spike tasted and explored his delicious Xander with his lips and tongue while he used his thumbs to rub circles around Xander’s nipples.

“Spike,” Xander finally whispered when Spike broke the breath taking kiss, “why?”

“Because, pet,” Spike answered as he rained gentle kisses down Xander’s throat. “I want you to cum only when I tell you.”

Spike laved Xander’s belly button as his pet began to laugh.

“You really are a control freak, you know that?” Xander chuckled forgiving Spike.

“I’m the captain,” Spike grinned as he paused his kisses to look Xander in the eye. Spike was smiling but Xander could see the hint of sadness lurking under the smile and some sort of inexpressible question. What was Spike asking?

Xander studied the incredibly beautiful man paused hungrily above him. Once again, some part of Xander understood. Spike needed the control. Spike had been powerless for so long he had to have control to feel safe.

Can I really give him that? Xander wondered. He stared into Spike’s blue eyes filled with want, desire and a need for Xander. There was a hint of sadness in those eyes but there was also laughter and teasing. Xander knew he’d inspired those emotions. I offered him my eye but perhaps this is what I can give instead.

Xander smiled and rolled his eye.

“Aye, Aye, Captain,” Xander drawled. Spike swooped in for another possessive kiss. Thank you, Xander, Spike thought not really realizing until that moment what had just passed between them.

“I’m going to shag ya until you’re completely balmy,” Spike uttered when he once again ended another breathtaking kiss. Xander nodded and tried to remember how to breathe. It didn’t help that Spike had begun blazing a trail with his tongue down Xander’s throat and sternum.

Xander gripped the headboard and moaned but tried to remain completely submissive and flat on the bed. Spike tasted and explored his pet with his tongue. Spike paid extra attention to Xander’s hard little nipples with long slow licks followed by quick bites and pinches.

Xander was panting and shaking now underneath Spike. He’d never wanted anyone as bad as he wanted Spike. Xander’s hard cock and full balls ached for release but still Spike feasted on Xander trailing his tongue down and swirling around Xander’s belly button.

“Spike!” Xander begged and whimpered as Spike’s tongue now danced on the tip of Xander’s red and purple tip. Spike worshiped and marveled at his pet’s beautiful staff and looked forward to many opportunities to play with it. Spike also looked forward to leaving Xander whimpering and begging for release.

Once again Spike moved away from his boy. He ignored Xander’s groan and grabbed a pillow.

“Lift up,” Spike ordered. Xander did. Spike chuckled to himself. So that’s the secret to get the mouthy git to follow orders immediately and without question; get ‘im hard and leaking!

Spike placed the pillow under Xander’s hips canting them up. Spike pressed gently on Xander’s waist indicating to relax back down on the bed. Xander did.

Once again Spike settled between Xander’s legs. Casually he began stroking the back of Xander’s thighs. There was still another place; another part of Xander for Spike to taste and explore.

Spike’s wandering hands brushed down and traced circles on Xander’s firm and muscled ass cheeks. Spike leaned forward and inhaled the musky intimate scent of his boy. Once again the primitive thought, MINE, rushed through Spike.

“Spike,” Xander nervously asked as he felt his ass cheeks being delicately parted.

“SPIKE!” Xander cried in pleasurable shock as Spike leaned forward a little more and placed a tender kiss on Xander’s secret hole.

“Shhh,” Spike mumbled against Xander’s puckered dusky flesh and then began to feast anew on his uncovered treat.

Xander used what remaining sanity he had to keep from arching off the bed. With each swipe of Spike’s tongue Xander was discovering a new sense of pleasure and erotic thrall. He whimpered, panted, begged, cried and shook. He was completely Spike’s.

Over and over Spike laved, kissed and tasted Xander’s hidden spot until Xander thought he was mindless with desire. It wasn’t until Spike slipped his tongue inside and breached Xander for the first time that he truly was mindless with desire.

Spike drank in the taste and the sound of his boy. Niether he or Spike would last that much longer. Still Spike continued to tongue fuck Xander. I’m going to open him up properly, Spike vowed.

When Xander’s little hole was completely open and accepting of Spike’s tongue, Spike slicked up three of his fingers. He sat back and watched his boy as gently he began to ease one finger inside his pet.

Xander had closed his eye while being caught up in the thrall of being tongue fucked by Spike but when he felt the firmer and stranger sensation of Spike’s finger breaching him Xander opened his eye and stared at Spike.

The two men silently watched each other as they began the erotic ritual that would open up Xander for the first time to receive another man. After a few moments, Spike’s finger slid easily into Xander.

The two men sighed in unison. Spike began a gentle rhythm of finger fucking Xander’s opening pressing in deeply and then withdrawing only to press back in deeply. Xander moaned at the promise of the sensation. He wanted Spike. He wanted all of Spike.

When Spike had pressed deeply for the third time he crooked his finger and rubbed the treasure spot inside of Xander. Spike grinned with pleasure as Xander gasped, flushed and then cried Spike’s name.

“That’s the spot I’m going to pound over and over when I’m inside ya, pet,” Spike said as he pulled back his finger and began to the work to get his boy opened wide enough for two fingers.

“Oh please,” Xander begged despite the slight burn of the added pressure.

“’M going to do this right, pet,” Spike said and then smiled as his boy once again opened up and his fingers slid into that tight heat that was Xander. Spike groaned. His own cock was leaking and hard waiting for its chance to be inside Xander.

Once again Spike finger fucked Xander and played with his prostate until he thought Xander was ready for three fingers.

“SPIKE PLEASE!” Xander shouted desperately as all three of Spike’s fingers were buried deep in Xander’s ass. “Please fuck me!”

Spike withdrew his fingers and then slicked up his cock. He looked up to see Xander had lifted his head and was watching him.  Spike smiled and made a show of stroking his own leaking need and generously lubing it.

Xander groaned. Spike then moved forward and positioned himself right at Xander’s opening.

Xander’s breath hitched as he felt the tip of Spike’s cock right there where Spike had so carefully prepared him. He was shaking with need and longrd to just impale himself on Spike if he could.

“I take ya,” Spike said interrupting Xander’s thoughts. “I claim ya and there’s no going back. I won’t let you go, Xander.”

 Xander’s brown eye met Spike’s piercing blue.

“Shut up and fuck me, Spike,” Xander smiled.

Spike grinned and began to thrust forward. Cor Blimey! Spike thought as Xander’s body opened up and began take Spike inside. He’s bloody amazing! He’s so tight and hot! I’m not going to last long!

“Spike!” Xander cried at the feeling of being filled up by Spike.

“Spike!” Xander panted again welcoming everything about the experience, the slight burn, the full sensation and the silky feel of Spike sliding against him and inside of him.

Both men locked gazes when Spike was settled fully inside of Xander. Both men grinned at each other as they paused a moment to let their bodies adjust.

“Wrap your legs around me, pet,” Spike ordered. Xander did.

“Now hang on, pet and watch me” Spike ordered as he began to thrust.

At first Spike was slow and gentle but as Spike began to thrust deeper into Xander the tempo increased. Xander kept his gaze locked with Spike’s. He felt he was on the verge of falling into the unfathomable blue of Spike’s eyes.

Over and over Spike thrust into Xander setting up a rhythm that left Xander gasping and begging. As promised, Spike tilted and angled his thrusts until he was constantly pounding against Xander’s sensitive nub.

“SPIKE!” Xander began to scream feeling his need overwhelming him despite the cock restraint.

Spike thrust deeply into Xander, paused and pitched forward to lay claim to Xander’s mouth. Spike’s tongue danced around and over Xander’s.  Xander groaned. Spike withdrew and then kissed his way down to Xander’s throat.

“Offer yourself to me,” Spike whispered against Xander’s neck. “I want to claim all of you.”

Xander was confused. He wasn’t sure what Spike meant but something instinctual inside of Xander did and he turned his head baring his throat to Spike.

There was both pleasure and pain as once again Spike began to thrust inside of Xander and then bit down hard on Xander’s neck. Spike thrust inside of Xander even as his tongue laved at the bit of blood the bite had drawn. I have tasted all of you now, my pet, Spike thought as he leaned back and really began to pound into Xander.

Spike’s increased tempo and powerful thrusts were bringing him close too. He reached forward and with a quick flick loosened the knot and removed the restraint.

Xander felt the freedom and nearly came but Spike quickly grabbed him.

“With me,” Spike hissed. Then Spike ceded his control. In and out, over and over, and skin against skin Spike and Xander moved.

Oblivion opened up before them. Spike released his hold on Xander.

“Cum for me, Xander!” Spike yelled as he felt his own release begin.

The two men locked gazes even as their bodies writhed and danced inside and against one another. Xander shot and spurted his release on his stomach and chest even as he felt Spike’s hot seed stream inside of him.

Xander was drowning in the bliss. His world was narrowing to just the pleasure of his intense orgasm and the blue of Spike’s eyes and then Xander slipped away into unconscious bliss.

Spike watched Xander’s eye blacken with pleasure until it was the color of pitch and then he was lost in his own oblivion.

***


Xander opened his eye to the sensation of something warm and wet rubbing against him.
“What are you doing?” Xander groaned as he struggled to get his completely satiated and relaxed body to sit up.

“Eatin’ my brekkies,” answered Spike as he licked his pet’s spunk off of his pet’s chest and stomach. “Have to say it’s your best dish yet.”

Xander laughed and collapsed on the bed.

“I suppose you will want this every morning?” Xander teased as Spike finally ceased his licking and moved up to kiss Xander.

“And at
noon, before bed, and as a snack in between meals,” Spike murmured against Xander lips.

“Hey, pure human here!” Xander laughed. “There’s only so much I can produce in a day.”

Spike lay down and once again arranged his pet so he could pet Xander’s hair.

“Oi,” Spike said. “Well then we’ll have to get Fred working on some special concoction so you can keep up with my dem…er needs.”

Xander rolled his eye. “In your dreams.”

Spike smiled. “Every night.”

TBC in prt 17





 

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Date: 2006-09-03 01:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jans-intentions.livejournal.com
I still have to catch up with this one and look forward to it, but I thought I'd let you know [livejournal.com profile] eshal did your banner for you. Check out her lj to find it.

Thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I hadn't seen that! That's wonderful! I just checked out and I love it!

Thank you for letting me know!

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 01:17 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bluewolfpanda.livejournal.com
*fanning myself* A great way to spend my break between jobs tonight. More please

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 01:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked. Don't worry...more will be coming soon.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 01:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shakatany.livejournal.com
Hot chapter. Glad you're back in action.

Shakatany

PS This may be a duplicate message but my previous efforts haven't emerged from cyberspace.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Glad to be back...can't promise the furious pace I had when I was on vacation..but I do promise to keep posting. I hope to do at least one post a week if not two.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 01:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lilithbint.livejournal.com
Bravo!
good sex...
happy Lili *grin*

*smile*

Date: 2006-09-03 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Thank you! Thought the bois had waited long enough (and so had the fans following the story).

sr

'BREAKING FREE' CH 16

Date: 2006-09-03 02:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] remitygirl.livejournal.com
YES!!!

That was hot and lovely and perfect!! Can't wait for more!!

Thanks for sharing!

Re: 'BREAKING FREE' CH 16

Date: 2006-09-03 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Thank you and your welcome. Don't worry..more will be coming. Can't promise the fast and furious pace I kept when I was on a vacation but will post a least once or twice a week.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] iz-factor.livejournal.com
sigh; whimmper. another great chapter.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Glad you enjoyed. :)

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 06:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alterian.livejournal.com
Absolutely delicious.

Very happy when I found this new chapters, but it was worth waiting for.

To be honest words have vaporised from my mind from the high temperature in this part so I will just say good writing, and hope to see more soon.

~Alterian

(I have added you to my friend list, hope that is ok...)

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 03:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I'm glad the chap was wort waiting for. :) I promise to post more. Won't be able to do the pace I did when I was on vacation but my goal is at least once or twice a week.

(I have added you to my friend list, hope that is ok...)

I'd be honored. :)

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 07:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] daedream-fanbot.livejournal.com
oh, dear, god.
That was so worth the wait!

"You taste like planetside"
Very much my favorite line!!

This was hot and needy and...I'll be in my bunk.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 03:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I'm glad it was worth the wait. :)

I liked the planetside line too.

This was hot and needy and...I'll be in my bunk. LOL

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 07:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyflame-uk.livejournal.com
As you will probably remember, (since I've been reviewing like crazy), I've been reading this on WWOMB, and to my delight I visited [livejournal.com profile] bloodclaim after an age, and discovered you're posting on LJ!! *goes off to friend you* XD

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 03:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Lady...wonderful! Yes I know who you are from WWOMB. Definitely watch for updates here on LJ. I post here first and there's usually a day or so lag between when I post on LJ and when I post to WWOMB (the extra time to format and the like for WWOMB).

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 09:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amaterashu.livejournal.com
You've spoilt me! I finally admit it, I'm addicted to this story. I was so used to you posting almost daily, that this past week has been awful, I've checked at least daily for your updates like a junkie looking for her next fix, it's been like rehab.

But now, you finally updated and what an update! Phew, is it hot in here, or is it just me? Great, hot, perfect chapter. So going to friend you after this.

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I'm sorry I had to make you all wait so long...but I'm at least glad it was worth it. :)

I won't be able to do the daily updates like I did while on vacation; but my intent is to get out an update at least once or twice a week.

Glad you waited for me. Was a little concerned I'd been gone too long. :)

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 10:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thismaz.livejournal.com
Oh, that was hot and sweet and satisfying. A true exchange and now they belong to each other. *satisfied sigh* Lovely.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 03:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
yeah...I think we all were waiting for this chap...including the bois...now hopefully they can stay together..no matter what happens.

I'm glad you liked and enjoyed.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 10:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angstpuppy.livejournal.com
gibblewurble....phew
You've rendered me speechless....good job!

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 03:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Well hopefully you have recovered!

Glad you liked.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] uncouthkitten.livejournal.com
"Spike had been powerless for so long he had to have control to feel safe" Behind all of the teasing and very hot sex, that line seemed to define the chapter for me, the fact that Xander cared enough to look behind the facade, to want to see all of the man and to do what he could to make him feel happy and secure. Looking forward to your next post.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 04:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I know what you mean. That was the defining moment of the chapter for me as well. It was Spike being most vulnerable in his need to control and Xander being able to care of Spike by letting Spike be "in control."

As someone else said..it was a true exchange between them.

Glad you liked. Won't be able to keep up my furious pace I had while on vacation but I promise to post at least once or twice a week.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 11:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rngrdead.livejournal.com
Gahhh!!! Where's the cold tap on the shower dammit! Wonderful stuff!!

Thank you for sharing

L
J

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Hope you got the shower working! LOL

Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for sticking with me despite the long dry spell.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 02:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hippychc.livejournal.com
Hot! So glad you're back, the boys were waiting so patiently, didn't budge while you were gone....and what a reward!

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 04:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
LOL Yep...figured the bois (and us) had waited long enough. Time for some serious nookie.

Glad you enjoyed.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 03:51 pm (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] tabaqui
Ahhhhhhh, pr0n.
:)

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 04:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Yep..Porn before the storm...

er...uhm..I mean...yeah.... *whistle whistle*

>;)

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 07:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thatotherperv.livejournal.com
yummy! glad to see the boys coming along nicely. unfortunate that the real world is going to try to interfere sooner or later.

Thank you...

Date: 2006-09-03 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Yeah...the bois really deserved this chapter...but yep..the true test of the fragile and new bond is going to come from dealing with the realties of the vers outside the DeSoto.

sr

Date: 2006-09-03 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lit-gal.livejournal.com
Have I told you how much I love you? I really do love this chapter, and I love that you saved it until the relationship felt right. Any time before this and it would have felt just wrong. Here... OMG, this was hot!

wow..thank you

Date: 2006-09-03 11:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
*blush*

Thank you..you are so sweet. It means a lot you really enjoyed this chapter. I value your opinion tremendously.

And yeah..this chapter had to wait until the right moment between the bois.

OMG, this was hot!

LOL *smile* thank you - never quite know if I go too far or not.

sr

Breaking Free

Date: 2006-09-04 12:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shay2.livejournal.com
I saved up about 7 updates to read all at once so I could have an amazing read...and you did not disappoint.

This story is FUCKING AMAZING! Everything aspect is so damn good. I cannot wait until Angel comes into the picture. Not to mention Willow and Buffy, who are no doubt trying to find their friend.

More soon
Shay

Re: Breaking Free

Date: 2006-09-11 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Thank you..there will be an update this week. :)

sr

Date: 2006-09-04 01:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vinniebatman.livejournal.com
*leers*
Heh heh heh. That was NICE!

Glady you enjoyed

Date: 2006-09-11 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
...there will be an update this week.

sr

Date: 2006-09-04 05:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wilde-moon.livejournal.com
I just spent most of the day and night reading this. I freaking love it! I can't wait to see where it goes.

Thank you!

Date: 2006-09-11 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Glad you like it.

There will be an update this week.

sr

Date: 2006-09-05 09:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stretfordditto.livejournal.com
Another excellent (hot) chapter. I've passed it to my sister to read, she's always asking for more of this. :)

thank you...

Date: 2006-09-11 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I hope to have an update this week.

sr

Thank you...

From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com - Date: 2006-10-02 10:55 pm (UTC) - Expand

Breaking Free 16

Date: 2006-09-06 05:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ietia.livejournal.com
Don't know if you realize it, but while this is up in your LJ, it isn't showing up in the Breaking Free memories.

Re: Breaking Free 16

Date: 2006-09-06 12:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
thank you..fixed... :)

Date: 2006-09-19 12:47 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] raphe1.livejournal.com
Is it time for another vacation yet??? SNOODLE

LOL - thank you

Date: 2006-10-02 10:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
Hope you are still out there some where. Sorry for the long delay. Just posted chapters 17 and 18. Had a real bad bout with my GAD when it came to writing (that's after recovering from the flare up of carpal tunnel syndrome brought on by the unusal amount of data entry I had to do while I'm covering for a vacant position).

But I'm starting to get back on track.

sr

Date: 2006-09-19 03:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com
hot, hot hot. Fans self....

Lovely stuff hon, can't wait for where you're going to take this next.

thank you

Date: 2006-10-02 10:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stillrose.livejournal.com
I'm so glad you liked! Sorry for the long delay. Chapters 17 and 18 are up!

sr
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