Is it hot in here? *looks for fan* Damn good read!
Have a sentence here that needs a word inserted. It moved inside and insolently snaked and danced the moist skin inside (against the moist skin? around? with?)
Looking forward to reading next chapter, feeling sorry for Other!Spike
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Date: 2010-04-23 05:10 am (UTC)Have a sentence here that needs a word inserted.
It moved inside and insolently snaked and danced the moist skin inside (against the moist skin? around? with?)
Looking forward to reading next chapter, feeling sorry for Other!Spike