Ohhh, Yes! I knew it!!!! Marns dances around gloating and chanting... "Ha! Knew it, knew it!" Now Xander and Spike can move on and make a huge stride forward! Yes! Wonderful chapter, and absolutely fabulous to get a second in only two days. :)
keep penning, Marns ~pobody's Nerfect
PS: Some errors I noticed...
Xander had nodded his ascent. (assent) Yet, there was something almost [longing] in Clem like he’d found a spark of courage he’d always lacked and if Xander refused him it might just put out that spark. (i dunno, but if you read it it doesn't quite make sense) The door opened and Lorne led [Spike] in by his leash. (Xander)
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Date: 2007-10-03 12:02 am (UTC)Ohhh, Yes! I knew it!!!! Marns dances around gloating and chanting... "Ha! Knew it, knew it!" Now Xander and Spike can move on and make a huge stride forward! Yes! Wonderful chapter, and absolutely fabulous to get a second in only two days. :)
keep penning,
Marns
~pobody's Nerfect
PS: Some errors I noticed...
Xander had nodded his ascent. (assent)
Yet, there was something almost [longing] in Clem like he’d found a spark of courage he’d always lacked and if Xander refused him it might just put out that spark. (i dunno, but if you read it it doesn't quite make sense)
The door opened and Lorne led [Spike] in by his leash. (Xander)