Not a chip! God I hate thse fucking Council arseholes! Can't somebody put a chip in their heads. let them know what it feels like to have your face kicked, but not be able to fight back.
The Dru part was absolutely lovely! I love the way she calls Xander kitten. I think it really suits him.
It was interesting to read from somebody else's point of view. I feel so sorry for Faith. Only have to ask one thing. Wes an fred are together, right? I don't think I got that wrong... It was just that this sentence confused me but she’d just had her hands inside a man she knew loved her and she needed a moment to compose herself. because she mentions how she knows Wes loves her, but nothing about how the man she loves might die. I just found the phrasing strange, did you have a special purpose for it?
You're doing a wonderful job as usual.
I am a complete confrontation addict, and proud of it! So I can't wait for hell to break loose (which I hope it does) when Xander meets his "old" family. Just make sure Xander and Spike are happy and together in the end :) Curious about your Giles. He has to be a bit different, I'm thinking, since he ought to have been aware of the whole Biogen history. Although, come to think of it, in BtVS he never really explained how the whole "demon = bad" concept is a bit more tricky than that. I want a big scene where Xander tells everyone he's a happy Biogen (almost) and in love with William the Bloody!
One correction: Fred sat down next to Fred The second "Fred" should be "Faith", since fred comes in to tell them how Wesley is doing.
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Date: 2007-02-01 08:52 pm (UTC)Not a chip! God I hate thse fucking Council arseholes!
Can't somebody put a chip in their heads. let them know what it feels like to have your face kicked, but not be able to fight back.
The Dru part was absolutely lovely! I love the way she calls Xander kitten. I think it really suits him.
It was interesting to read from somebody else's point of view. I feel so sorry for Faith.
Only have to ask one thing. Wes an fred are together, right? I don't think I got that wrong... It was just that this sentence confused me
because she mentions how she knows Wes loves her, but nothing about how the man she loves might die. I just found the phrasing strange, did you have a special purpose for it?
You're doing a wonderful job as usual.
I am a complete confrontation addict, and proud of it! So I can't wait for hell to break loose (which I hope it does) when Xander meets his "old" family. Just make sure Xander and Spike are happy and together in the end :)
Curious about your Giles. He has to be a bit different, I'm thinking, since he ought to have been aware of the whole Biogen history. Although, come to think of it, in BtVS he never really explained how the whole "demon = bad" concept is a bit more tricky than that.
I want a big scene where Xander tells everyone he's a happy Biogen (almost) and in love with William the Bloody!
One correction:
The second "Fred" should be "Faith", since fred comes in to tell them how Wesley is doing.
I want more! It's getting so exciting!
Hugs!